All Comments on 'Inhumanity - dona eis requiem'

by ferociouskittycat

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ABSTRUSEABSTRUSEover 19 years ago
The title speaks volumes

I love the content, the rhythm, the full circle. Intense and beautiful.

Lalenya LoveLalenya Lovealmost 20 years ago
You moved this Witch.

You have crafted an accomplished and poignant pantoum. Keep writing, Kitty!

Never again the Burning Times!

Blessed Be!

Lalenya :^)

Lord DragonsWingLord DragonsWingalmost 20 years ago
I love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

This is one of the most touching poems I've read. You definitely hit the truth with this one. Excellent research. Fuck the commas the poem is excellent.

Maria2394Maria2394almost 20 years ago
ya need

a comma here and there, but I love your subject matter, if I had written one, it would have been about this...ever hear of Dorcas Goode? a small child who was imprisoned with her mother, she was only 5..now that is inhumane, consider the prisons back then, I believe she lived with a pastors family after the trials and went insane at an early age...all of the witch trial transcripts are online... makes for interesting reading :

good work :)

twelveoonetwelveoonealmost 20 years ago
Inflammed me

enough to give it a 100

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