by ferociouskittycat
I love the content, the rhythm, the full circle. Intense and beautiful.
You have crafted an accomplished and poignant pantoum. Keep writing, Kitty!
Never again the Burning Times!
Blessed Be!
Lalenya :^)
This is one of the most touching poems I've read. You definitely hit the truth with this one. Excellent research. Fuck the commas the poem is excellent.
a comma here and there, but I love your subject matter, if I had written one, it would have been about this...ever hear of Dorcas Goode? a small child who was imprisoned with her mother, she was only 5..now that is inhumane, consider the prisons back then, I believe she lived with a pastors family after the trials and went insane at an early age...all of the witch trial transcripts are online... makes for interesting reading :
good work :)