All Comments on 'Invite to Escape'

My wife and I had our son off and

out of the house for about two months

running around naked and finally the

house to just the two of us and

my niece got detained "grin" we wound

up raiseing her two little ones

a 2 month old and 2 years old so it

started all over again <grin>

hince: My Erotic Tails "Blizzard"

nice poem Tung~

and wonderful memories

oh yea and erotic <grin>

and affectionate, the tone of this enjoyable poem. I have trouble trying to get the word "soothe" to fit; it's like a rough spot in an otherwise polished gem. Thanks!

I tend to agree about "soothe". I only knew it as a verb. I would also say that this is an erotic poem. One of soft and soothing warmth.

I'd change soothe to soothing--it sounds more soothing that way. :)

Dear Tung,

What I really enjoyed was the hurried, long lines to the change of one or two words, the transition from conveluded to simple, burdened to sensuous.

You listed this as non-erotic, but I would beg to differ. a very pretty piece, more complex than first glance would lead one to believe.