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My Erotic TaleMy Erotic Taleover 19 years ago
Excellent poetry L~

once again your enchanting style

graces our mninds. wonderful poem

and so glad to see you back in the saddle

of writing, don't fret the small minded comments

just gaze at the destination of

your poetic dreams and write another...<grin>

WickedEveWickedEveover 19 years ago
You do have some nice...

lines in this poems. These stanzas are good:

"Nope I was sound a sleep

dreaming of him

with desires not ignited.."

Good line about desires not ignited.

No white or gold boldness

Making me braver

I snuggled in my down comforter.."

White or gold boldness--excellent. :)

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