Try the free LITEROTICA WEBCAMS!

All Comments on 'It's me'

by SkarlittFeenicks

Sort by:
Newest FirstOldest First
  • 1 Comment
AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
lyric material

At first I wondered about the "it's me" repetition. I understood the intent and that was cool, but then I'm thinking, "break it up somewhere" which you handled just fine, at the end.

I think this is song lyric potential.

Anonymous
Our Comments Policy is available in the Lit FAQ
Login
Post as:
Anonymous
Login
userSkarlittFeenicks@SkarlittFeenicks
18 Works
6 Followers
Like music to your ears, honey on your lips, a sight for sore eyes. The touch, the feel, the ache, the need. When I say fuck, its not a dirty word.