All Comments on 'Jealousy'

I liked this one the best. On all three of your poem I found your line breaks oddly intriguing and was immediately reminded of some of W.C. William's poems. Here you left me dangling at the end of a line, wanting it to read on, but pausing before rolling down to the next line. Something about that here added to the poem, not really an intrigue but an anticipation that I enjoyed. Very good...

jim : )