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wonder of wonders, never thought i'd see a villanelle i like. didn't even realize it was one at first, when you do that, that is higher order poetry!

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why did we begin this quest. TK U MLJ LV NV

You may want to rethink some of the repeated lines as the power of this form often comes from the magnetic, drawing in through the repetition - see Dylan Thomas - do not go gentle for the classic example of the power of the form.