All Comments on 'Jumble of rhymes'

but lets get serious for a moment

Just say you'll never leave my ass

Jumping through the looking glass

is the high point, fresh

now take a look at the first stanza, and compare it to the second, see the nice change up, you do the same thing with the rhyme of bend it/mend it

these are nice starts...

I foured it, if you want to know

I'm 90% slut and 10% romantic... This was perfect for my romantic side!