All Comments on 'Junction'

I hope you consider lengthening the verses in this poem, the listy structure makes the read choppy and eliminating the extranneous line breaks would smooth the imagery out. ... You have a verb/subject disagreement in line eight and maybe you could consider writing the number 38 out in words rather than numerals. Good poem.

Who hasn't dreamt of those magic moments? As for the listy feel mentioned in the previous comment; massage this a bit and break it into three strophes and the listy feel will disappear.