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by demure101

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twelveoonetwelveooneabout 11 years ago
Now, now, my dear

Splendid couplets

Perfectly scanned

equals boredom, and this did, and this as an end

Our tattered hopes, bright mornings or the few

Short golden hours when all our skies were blue.

equals triteness, but i did consider the superb irony of the title

Junk

so i fived

DawnJDawnJalmost 12 years ago
Delightful...

...even if the thoughts are bittersweet. I so enjoy reading your poetry! :)

SweetOblivionSweetOblivionalmost 12 years ago
Splendid couplets

Perfectly scanned - an example to many. Sweet O.

tazz317tazz317almost 12 years ago
HOARDERS AND COLLECTORS

all have the same merchandise. TK U MLJ LV NV

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