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erectus123erectus123over 10 years ago
nicely erotic

well done

Ashesh9Ashesh9over 10 years ago
Onamism .....or ....

One's-own-ism !!!

WillOtheWispWillOtheWispover 10 years ago
well done

Most couplet poems like this end up seeming contrived and awkward. Your rhymes were very smooth and didn't distract from the eroticism at all. 5

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