All Comments on 'Kinky Lass'

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WillOtheWispWillOtheWispalmost 11 years ago
well done

Most couplet poems like this end up seeming contrived and awkward. Your rhymes were very smooth and didn't distract from the eroticism at all. 5

Ashesh9Ashesh9almost 11 years ago
Onamism .....or ....

One's-own-ism !!!

erectus123erectus123almost 11 years ago
nicely erotic

well done

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