All Comments on 'Kirby'

Lovely poem, loved the ending - very punchy and raw

Your poem has been mentioned in the New Poems thread on the Literotica Poetry Forum:

http://www.literotica.com:81/forum/showthread.php?p=16338591#post16338591

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In the beginning I though, who way too much, but kind of like a letterman joke, after a while it was so much it was a good thing. And yes, great ending line

One of your better writes

Tripping off my tongue

{but not tripping up}

With nice imagery to boot.