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by ShyWetThief
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Anonymousover 18 years agosimple is good
Something is missing, I don't know what. I do like this
a lot. sandspike
LeBrozover 18 years ago~~
Welcome to Lit with this your first verse;
a very good first try,
seems a bit strained in the middle,
keep working and growing.
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