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Cut the title of my comment into/onto a strip of paper, give it a half-twist, and glue the ends together. Then read to end.

(I very much enjoyed this,)

My apologies for that, but this one required a bit of time and some thinking, and maybe even a little googling. Which, in my mind, is not a bad thing.

I love the movement of your mind here, that this both feels right instinctually to me, but also makes me think about it. I had to look up what a Klein bottle was, which was pretty interesting. Not necessary to enjoy or get something from the poem, but the visual and information led to more personal understanding.

Within the whole, this is what really grabbed me and held on:

You are a volumeless container -

what you think you hold is

merely moving through you.

Really am such a fan of your writing.