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WickedEveWickedEveabout 17 years ago
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Okay, is there a special meaning in L:ight or is it a typo? :) I wish you'd flesh the poem out a bit more. I like voyeuristic poetry. I'd like to know more about the bumps and grinds the narrator watches, but without telling me it's bumps and grinds--be more specific. Give the readers some juicy details! And reconsider the rhyme.

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