All Comments on 'Lap Dance I'

Get a lap dance I hope it would be just like that. Don't know how she is (un)dressed but assuming a lot of skin. Liked the way you intespersed the very appropriate song - is that your creation? Looking forward to Lap Dance II

I didn't write that song lol... that's Rihanna's "Only Girl" but thanks for your kind comments.

If I ever gave a lap dance it'd probably be something like that.

Sometimes leaving out details like clothing leaves the readers imagination in charge.

Noticed one typo. Should be no "to" at the end of the second line.

the afore mentioned action, TK U MLJ LV NV

Guess I should listen to more modern music. I go from Ella Fitzgerald to Stevie Nicks. Agree absolutely about leaving the "clothing" as well as what she looks like to the imagination. I have a vivid imagination. Mmmmmmmmm.

your description of erotic actions : as i have mentioned elsewhere for a confirmed Bottom fetishitist like me this poem is Heaven's Manna !

As someone that's received his fair share of lap dances I can confidently say that this was a masterful description of a lap dance that would be worth every penny. Great wordplay and very suggestive imagery. Hell yeah, Lesse! Hell yeah!