All Comments on 'Lesbians Invented Love Poetry'

I really liked this. I liked the ending line, I think it adds a level of yearning sorrow to the otherwise lustful actions here. It reads really well. I liked the "actions, not words, foolish girl". Very good snippet of insight into this character, good tension building, it's just right. I liked this poem, very nice :)

A simple yet powerful poem. very easy to understand the thoughts of two souls locked up, almost bound together.

love the last line...makes all the difference...excellent! x