All Comments on 'Letter to Jonas'

and yet it proceeds with a linear logic that makes the speaker's anguish that much more obvious. It sort of reminds me of a dramatic monologue (e.g., a la Robert Browning) in which the speaker inadvertantly reveals himself in the course of the poem. As usual, Ice writes with insight and such fluency.

...and one of the most poignant. Impressive writing, Ice, and technically skilful too.

from reality....powerful and in some way reminded me of Pink Floyds The wall..."look mommie, theres an airplane up in the sky!!"

a sort of surreal amazement and wonder...great poem, Icingsugar, loved it maria

....just that I loved this tender, emotional piece.