All Comments on 'Letter to Jonas'

....just that I loved this tender, emotional piece.

from reality....powerful and in some way reminded me of Pink Floyds The wall..."look mommie, theres an airplane up in the sky!!"

a sort of surreal amazement and wonder...great poem, Icingsugar, loved it maria

...and one of the most poignant. Impressive writing, Ice, and technically skilful too.

and yet it proceeds with a linear logic that makes the speaker's anguish that much more obvious. It sort of reminds me of a dramatic monologue (e.g., a la Robert Browning) in which the speaker inadvertantly reveals himself in the course of the poem. As usual, Ice writes with insight and such fluency.