All Comments on 'Life II'

I like this alot. It's compact, and more precise than it looks at first clange. A great addition to the Lit poetry roster.

In my view this is the best of the work that you have posted so far. Only the second stanza seems inappropriate. I don't understand the smell of "carrion" between

"Waxed fruit

And

Synthetic flowers"

and

"The

Sawdust dinner"

By the way,

"To

Many"

needs another "o". :)