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by joeys-game

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AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Real

Life or fantasy, is this from your background, sounds lke it could be?

A very intense experience, thanks for sharing!

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
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I like the message.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
I love this

line

Reality comes crashing down,

A beating, real, on solid ground.

Beautiful...

Stella_OmegaStella_Omegaover 18 years ago
Thoughtful and moving

and your hard work shows, in the effortless way the poem flows.

I am proud of you, Joey- you must be proud of yourself!

Tom CollinsTom Collinsover 18 years ago
Read this a while ago...

...and forgot to leave you a comment on it, lovie. Love this one, it's evocative, poignant, visceral in it's laying donw of reality. *hugs*

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