by joeys-game
...and forgot to leave you a comment on it, lovie. Love this one, it's evocative, poignant, visceral in it's laying donw of reality. *hugs*
and your hard work shows, in the effortless way the poem flows.
I am proud of you, Joey- you must be proud of yourself!
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Reality comes crashing down,
A beating, real, on solid ground.
Beautiful...
Life or fantasy, is this from your background, sounds lke it could be?
A very intense experience, thanks for sharing!