All Comments on 'Lifespan'

of meaning and emotion in so few words

Very Nice

Thank you

Tathagata

so often when using couplets the rhyme overtakes the poem, detracting from the overall effort, however, here you have a very unobtrusive rhyme, that works well with the poem. Some excellent rhyme pairs made this an enjoyable read. A life in some rhythm and rhyme, very good...

jim : )

Very nicely, simply stated. I love it.