All Comments on 'Liquid Euphoria'

by RhymeFairy

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dorksicledorksicleover 18 years ago
Hmmm..

Tongue twister? ;)

LeBrozLeBrozover 18 years ago
Tongue Twister is right.........and then some !!

What is this

oh wicked one,

a paean to

our little gusher

Jenn? <salacious grin>

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Poetry?

Ok so you know some long words, good for you but you don't actually say anything! There is NO intelligence in your writing just alot of flowery pretencious words that add up to a big a fat zero in my book!

Jennifer CJennifer Cover 18 years ago
lol @ Leons comment!

As a 'gusher' myself, lol

I have to say I really enjoyed

this! I love your use of words

and how you make em all flow

together just right.

Well done hun

~ Jenn (Your smutty buddy)

bigntenderbigntenderover 18 years ago
Another scorcher

When will you stop torturing me with these? love the alliteration. One question? How can gushing be grotesque?

LeBrozLeBrozover 18 years ago
Hey - RF & JC ..............

Still chuckling over your verse

and JC's little pc;

and twixt she and me is? ~

dare I say it <snicker>

our trailer trash poetess!

Out to spoil our

deliciously, salaciously, nasty fun,

Quick ! Get her a dictionary.

So she can learn how to spell

pretentious.....Hey hon-

I read your book -

the one you wish you had -

softcover, with only 25 pages,

all blank (verse?)

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
^^^^^^^^^^^^

Your poem was mentioned in the sunday reviews

du lac~

WickedEveWickedEveover 18 years ago
Good title

Interesting poem, RF. I'm sure you had fun with it.

My Erotic TaleMy Erotic Taleover 18 years ago
very clever

how do you write, with intellect. <rolls eyes> very wild and imaginative creative writing RF...keep up the passion in words ...your poetic charm has charmed 98% of us <grin>

Jennifer CJennifer Cover 18 years ago
To the anonymous idiot

You want to talk about writing with intelligence when you can't even spell pretentious!!! They have adult literacy classes for morons like you ya know!

Or why not go online, www.Idon'tknowshitaboutpoetry.com

Just a thought...

twelveoonetwelveooneabout 13 years ago
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reading the comments, I get the feel an injustice was done

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