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Loved this! "mute witnesses to what was" Oh my heart knows that feeling.

Beautiful work.

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It makes me imagine a couple

beyond a parting of ways

separated asunder

like a zipper opened

hands entangled once

waving a final goodbye

heads bowed down

trying to escape the spiral

and find another half a jacket

to couple with against the stormy loneliness

...or at least

a friendly hook to hold on to

and be on hold