All Comments on 'Little bit of a love poem'

I come back to read this. It's rare and beautiful in a raw and honest way that is truly both romantic and prime erotica.

~ABG💋

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Something about this piece was bugging me for a while and I couldn't nail it down, I think you may have found it, thank you for the input!!

I would say you have two poems here. I'd edit to a stop after the word cider, fix the next line and end there. These are the strongest part of the poem and the most universal. The rest is more personal and pleasant but the first part is the heart of the matter. But of course what do I know? Carry on Aussie!

I love it...not just a little bit...but a lot.

This is very sweet and gracefully moving. You have done a very nice job here.

Between the first and second stanzas lies life lived with a partner, so well captured.