All Comments on 'little jade dolls'

that has meadows of apples and limes?

A small suggestion, avoid the extra space between the lines, makes it difficult to read. (at least for me)

I don't understand this, well maybe I do

"the dandelions, snapdragons, lillies and orchids

make love with the oregano and thyme"

On to the good stuff:

smiles meet and kisses greet

nice line internal rhyme, not overdone elsewhere

This really has a nice feel and flow to it, nice combinations of words.

Sounds like a picnic, I wish it was a little clearer, but then I can be dense

Shows alot of promise.

(I wish I was there)