All Comments on 'living bodies'

Fantastic strophe:

"flash through slats

the shade of rattan and vinyl

across lover?s skin

time versus light, rake"

it was meant to mean pile of warm living,

bodies not at rest

this brought to mind Rodin's "Gates of Hell"

and it is just as hot.

Like in Yertle the Turtle, I do not want to be all the way at the bottom.

and quit giving yourself zeros goof ball