All Comments on 'Living the Shooting Star'

One of your best....particularly like the following:

Elders see their life while others see their destiny

cosmic dust bunnies amongst glittering black

Living the shooting star

Fabulous stuff!

I should have known sack was back when I saw my votes this morning. Very very nice piece Du, one of my favorites from you. An "E" material. Excellent.

As I didn't vote on his poetry offering today (but have voted on others if they effect me emotionally) and I've been "back" for well over a month. How sad that someone uses the Public Forums to take a potshot at another poet. Reflects more on Tale than me!

Very nice Du~

We should all look to the stars more often.

This is excellent du,

a really well written

beautiful poem.

Deserves an E!

Thanks.

~ Jenn

Wonderful imagery Du~!!!

I love your writing.

It always makes me reach deep inside and pull out the best I have to offer.

Your writing is excellent~!!

I love the form, imagery, flow.

You make it seamless... brilliant~!!!

Muchh much more plezzz

Floating and timeless traveling through space

close to heaven and far from hell

a soul peacefully floating on the milky way

in this gives the reader a nice sigh...great pen...bluerains

"cosmic dust bunnies" - I love it! Well done Du!

Tess

...I forgot the therm. Rumour has it only the 1st one counts - if that's true I'm sorry but rest assured I gave you a 5.

Tess the Thermophobe.

Indeed. Very powerful stuff.

ty,bd