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by todski28

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twelveoonetwelveooneover 10 years ago
nice little

metaphor

extended

but a bit of an exercise

WTF a 5

TsothaTsothaabout 10 years ago

Agreed, good metaphor. However, for an erotic poem, I feel that timing / padding / length / building anticipation is an important component. This is too short to really hit that goal, I think... Damn. Erotic poems are difficult.

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