All Comments on 'Loneliness'

This is so emotional; when I read it, I understood entirely. The feelings are so raw and pure; so comparable and real. It made me... sad, but in that bitter, love felt way.

There are some technical little poetry "no-no"s, but they're easily dismissed and made up for by richness.

Girlfriend, I shed a tear for the circumstances that would cause you to feel you had to write "Loneliness".

I share my feelings and understand the vulnerability. Please, can I stay?

Wyo_girl

Loved the poem. I feel the same all the time. Even with my SO in the house.