All Comments on 'Longing to break her off.'

I liked it.

or himself to do or not to do, TK U MLJ LV NV

Don't tell me, show me...I agree with you on that.

Thanks.

I'm going to spend some more time in the forum section, and keep learning.

I admit that story was an impulse.

Honesty and suggestions always appreciated.

This piece is too obvious, as if a Dominant's stream of consciousness is not restrained You tell too much and show too little. This makes this piece un-erotic.

Maybe, try again?