All Comments on 'Looking For You'

I wondered if you might want to consider dropping one of the modifiers when you say "...small little voice". It seemed to flow better if you dropped a syllable there, saying either "...tiny voice" or simply "...little voice", otherwise a tight little poem. Nice work.

jim : )

I liked this.

"Small little" seems redundant. I'd ditch one, probably "little".

write thanks for the read

TT