All Comments on 'Lord and Savior'

I don't think you should have gone here, although I must admit that you a very good poet. Why not do one like this about the devil?

Because this poem is all about how Eve's blind faith in Jesus makes her blind to what he's very obviously about to do, and even while he's doing it she never actually tries to stop him because she's been taught to revere him. Now obviously it's just a bit of fun and I have no idea if the actual Jesus Christ went around sodomizing people, but that dynamic wouldn't be there if I chose the devil because she wouldn't feel beholden to the devil's orders. Also, I'm glad you at least liked the rhythm, etc. I knew this one wasn't gonna be for everyone.

Great work, god will reward you for your creativity and skill. The dumb folk who believe god exists will piss on you but the smart asses will clap for you. Great job!

Were was the almighty this past weak week? Probably jerking off over your poem or she was using a vibrator.

T. S. Smeck