All Comments on 'Lost in Lust'

Lust clouds the mind and men rarely use theirs when it comes to lust anyway.

Twister / Kicker / Killer !! thnx for sharin' ......

Thank you!I really am trying something different with my writing and please vote I love the comments

Xoxo

J

When I scan new poems now, the build up and twist in this is perfectly timed and well executed :)

not to mention the weaving of longing, femininity and reality all through the piece,

The repetition of remembering and the sexual build through the stanzas was for me just right,