All Comments on 'Love Haiku desu'

well presented progress through the other 3 seasons. I don't know much about haiku, but it seems, almost, as if you had to force the words into conformity. Maybe try to write a conventional poem on your topic, it could be more satisfying to you as the poet.

Megu, this is excellent. First, I feel your disappointment and pain. The sense of longing and memory for things past. Second, your clever use of the seasons and the double meaning in Fall. Really clever. I will have to read more. Thank you. Arigato gozaimasu