All Comments on 'Loves Lost Lament'

by Shady_Lady

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AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I just loved it! Evokes so much.

sakall2009sakall2009over 2 years ago

Very moving. Still erotic but so much yearning in there. Thank you.

Paul4playPaul4playover 2 years ago

Raw emotion.

Very powerful.

LeCavalierLeCavalierover 2 years ago

Very well structured. You have succeeded in writing an erotic poem that is deep.

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I have been asked if the contents of my stories are true, well some are and some aren't. The Julie Journals are autobiographical and about 95% true. I have changed names in some places and amended timelines to condense into a single story. Outside of the Julie Journals where...

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