Loving

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A poem about someone leaving.
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Loving me is difficult.
Some days I can be full of life, contrary on others.
I can be full of life in an instant, and empty at the very next.
I can show you unadulterated love, but bear down on you with my anger, trust issues, and sorrow.
I asked for once chance.
You said yes.
I asked for more chances.
And your yesses disappeared.
You loving me was hard.
You leaving me wasn't.

- Percival

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MigbirdMigbirdabout 2 months ago

Liked very much this poem. Loved it without 4th line — just me. Feels tighter, flows more naturally but hey I am not a poet so … .

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