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by PercivalSlater
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Migbirdabout 2 months agoLiked very much this poem. Loved it without 4th line — just me. Feels tighter, flows more naturally but hey I am not a poet so … .
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PercivalSlater@PercivalSlaterI am but a servant to the dance of my pen. I am but a serf to the lust of my mind. I am but a slave to the desires of my lover.
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