by xwriterxxx
It's funny, I hope it was meant to be, if it wasn't these are really bad:
Let nothing cum tween us
T'other side of my wall
The total banality of these two lines:
The clock it has stopped
The sheets they are white
has to be deliberate.
If I'm wrong, keep the score, delete the comment, and try not to do it again.
I hope it's supposed to be funny too because does anyone actually say 'To my door it's the key'? If it's not supposed to be hilarious I beg your pardon too but it gave me the giggles :)
Probably not unfair and quite nicely put by both parties. :). Just wanted to get something up there... As the old saying goes...
Will try and do butter next time. Especially re the banal part!!! :)