by Ancient117331
This certainly delineates that feeling of being in love, of loving competely and so well. It's wonderful and scary and delightful! I love it!
How real and sweet this is.....I have felt some of these very same feelings before..... :)
This poem sums up how I feel about a certain young lady in Australia. We were to meet this weekend, December 13th, but alas our plans were dashed. Now we'll have to wait two years.
I was really impressed with this poem..I've been reading the new submissions none had the emotion and sincerity that yours did..kudos..me likey ;)
This rendering comes accross as a warm intimate description of a man's tender affections. Lovely.
Your poems sound real. this one is conversational and has an intimate quality that comes less from the subject, imo, and more from its honesty.
See? I said I'd read it and I did! :)
Wow, your poem moved me, excited to read more of your work....