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EroticOrogenyalmost 15 years agoLike the change over the stanzas
The first stanza is some detached/neutral and the sensuality comes in later.
Does every line need to end with a ',' ? It seems to work in most, but a couple lines would benefit from dropping the comma.
Anonymousabout 14 years agoYep, not many can handle the storm
We're just a bunch of university coeds that like your poems in prose. You're kind of like Tom Robins we are guessing. "Even Cowgirls Get the Blues."
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