All Comments on 'Maidenhead Spring'

but reluctantly

some nice lines, a little long, concluding verses might be more orgasmic

but too many "Ands" and overall kind of blah. I agree with erectus that if you put more exciting language in that last verse (what kind of metaphor for sex is "laugh"? it works but not well), you will amp up the whole poem.

Just my opinion and thanks for the read. :-)