All Comments on 'Make Believe Melter'

the toss outs, i.e. "Fine,"

"So fine,

be stasis, rock, ice, whatever,"

define this as a monologue, I do like the placement of "whatever" It shows great confidence. As does this:

"Everywhere all yours now

and everything all mine."

in defining emotional space, all simple, so perfect.

There is a clue to all of this

somewhere, I do belive.

But it will find me tomorrow,

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Don't count on it! MET

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I like the conversational tone—the voice compliments this cryptic, crafty poem of yours, Liar.

This was my favorite...

I drown another blighter

bursting bubble

in banter and bourboun,

this aimless all nighter.

Counting hours in the sweat beads

trickling down another

aimless hunter's

delectable throat.

is the prey a willing victim ? :heart:

There is a clue to all of this

somewhere, I do belive.

But it will find me tomorrow,

How I have missed reading and everyone here on Lit

What a wonderful experience, to simply let this one trip off the tongue and savor the sounds! Thanks, Liar.