All Comments on 'Maturity'

I like concision. Ditch the capitals though. There is a reason haiku did; They are distracting.

Perfect poem! It tells a real story, and in only three lines and six words. The word "matures" is so excellent. It prepared us for one idea and delivers a turnaround that made this reader shake his head in admiration.

might be better as:

Summer’s lover

matures

into winter’s fool

but a rather cliched concept, doesn't dig deep enough