All Comments on 'Maybe I'll be a Buddhist...'

Tears in the rain- gone unnoticed

Painful emotions- gone unspoken

Liked it,

Thanks.

~ J

Your poem was mentioned in the thread

"New Poems Reviews"

thanks for the journey in words~

for a good title. And that one puts a fresh spin on the poem. Well done.

I think you meant "in vain" rather than "in vein"

Strong feelings here laid bare;

Boo offered some helpful thoughts on your thread;

in all things just remember, it's your feelings,

your soul, that's exposed.

Take guidance and suggestions from others,

but it's YOU that stands there exposed.