All Comments on 'Milky Way Meltdown'

I'll probably have to read this a dozen times in an attempt to understand it! Marvelous imagery, I especially like the "Cycling Mea Culpa" phrase. Good job!

I'll probably have to read this a dozen times in an attempt to understand it! Marvelous imagery, I especially like the "Cycling Mea Culpa" phrase. Good job!

i mentioned this submission in the New Poem Review thread in the Poetry Forum. the 50% temp rating here is so that it does not affect other temp ratings that follow. - wildsweetone

I may not really understand the poem, but with this poem that's okay. It's wonderful to read.

...maybe not so, but you have me imagining it. Thank you, I enjoyed.

frolicking down and tasting lol

I always enjoy reading your frolic poetry (~_~) bows humble~

I always felt that extended imagery which is agile enough to sustain it's freshness throughout a whole poem is much more erotic (IMHO) then any direct 'naming. Live it to the mobilized reader to arrive at the erotic conclusion of each part of the imagery and the results are most likely to be measured on galactic a scale of explosiveness!