All Comments on 'Milt'

Your start is so picturesque and the finish is a, little, cliche. Drop the graphic sex in the middle and let us infer it through the fertilization of the eggs and you'd have a very good poem. This poem is mentioned on the New Poems Review thread in the Poetry Feedback and Discussion forum on Literotica's Bulletin Boards. Thanks for showing us your poetry, Carrie.

never read a poem about roe before.

I sort of agree with Champagne about the middle verse, but I do see why you have it in there, it is secondary to the row/milt part of the poem. To me, the sex in the middle part is showing that life goes on and humans are incidental to the "bigger" picture

I was touched by this poem, made me feel small, but in a very good way.

keep up the good work

:)

nj