All Comments on 'Mind Seduction'

I like how you write to your master and still use a capital I. It shows to me, the importance of the "sub" who in my opinion, is the one who is really in control anyway. It also symbolizes, to me, the confidence in the relationship that allows both to retain identity.

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Well now "Dorothy,"

Welcome to Lit;

And I second Anna's thoughts about

Caps and lack thereof;

Those that use them might not see

It's a distracting style

And detracts from the message.

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