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by CorinnaParr

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TzaraTzaraabout 15 years ago
Quite good. Interesting to me, at least.

I really liked the line "when your eyes travel my face" for the verb, particularly. The title confuses me, but I'm a dunce.

CorinnaParrCorinnaParrabout 15 years agoAuthor
Thank you!

You aren't a dunce, the title is vague. When you're not a morning person, but are married to someone who is, it isn't easy to catch them so that they wake up to your smiling eyes.

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